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地址:青岛市市南区南京路8号 府都大厦909室我猜你新建了一个word文档,干坐了一个晚上,却只憋出几个字?
文书到底应该怎么写?我们又应该注意哪些细节呢?
为了帮助大家解决留学文书PS写作难题,上海申友留学七七特地为大家整理了这些写作要点:
1. 抓住主线展开,主题不明确是一大忌。所选的材料必须是与申请人去留学的目的、选择该项目或者该学校有重要关联的素材。
2. 对自己的研究方向了如指掌,准确清晰地描述自己的研究内容,不要堆积专业名词或充当“高手”。
3. 一定要按照学校的要求来写PS,比如字数要求等。PS的字数要尽可能的接近或稍微超过学校的字数要求,在网申时一定要多注意看学校的官方要求。
4. 针对学校问题回答;每个学校对申请书都会有一些特殊的要求,所以必须有问必答。
5. 最好不要有表达上的问题,自己要用自己拿手的有把握单词和句式,千万不要因为想多样性,而去多样性。
6. PS切忌套用模板,好的PS是千锤百炼的结果,是思想的结晶。初稿时可以借鉴别人好的经验,这是必须也是必要的,但是成型后的PS一点要有自己的特点。
但是正所谓完事开头难,虽然道理我们都懂,但是实际做起来的时候却还是让人挠头……
所以,上面都是虚的,下面才是干货!这几个文书开头写作方法值得借鉴!
开门见山法
先点出重点,再依据事件发生顺序,将所见所闻写出。
e.g.
I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field
I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. I am most proud of my testing projects.
引用法
开头引用各种资料,加以引申,达到吸引读者,帮助突出中心的作用。
e.g.
When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty.
During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.
精辟设喻法
留学ps开头设喻,以引起读者对要说明的事物或道理的兴趣。
e.g.
“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”
Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.
背景渐入法
引入特殊事件,阐述兴趣的起源。
e.g.
As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk.
I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform people''s lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more.
个人陈述开头引入家庭背景。
e.g.
My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father’s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments.
This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk.
This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.
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