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地址:青岛市市南区南京路8号 府都大厦909室我猜你新建了word文档,干坐了一个晚上,却只憋出几个字?
PS到底应该怎么写?
小小申给大家整理了一些写文书的要点和方法,快来看看吧~
1、加入申请专业方向知识理解的应用,以及你对该学科的热情。注意!你展示的干货应该与你的个人包装/profile相一致。请别写跟硬广植入一样,而是巧妙地传达:虽然我不是知识的生产者,但我是出色的搬运工。
2、大学毕竟是搞学术的地方,如果你做了点研究,建议你在英国申请文书、美本部分学校的补充文书中小秀一下研究成果。但是请不要一一罗列奖项,而是用故事说服他们:为什么你的眼中常含泪水?因为你对学术爱得深沉。
3、两点之间最短的距离是线段,而你和招生官只隔着文书。不管你用什么华丽的词藻、离奇的剧情、刁钻的立意,你最好把话给说清楚了。毕竟,招生官只有几分钟决定你能否被录取。
4、写叙事文,故事情节是读者最在意的东西。糟糕的情节大都千篇一律,而精彩的情节往往出人意料。成人世界大多很无聊,请写点让人眼前一亮的东西。
5、我们常说,少点套路,多点真诚。所以请你原创!
当然,这些都是虚的,而干货就在下面。
一篇文章开头有多重要,想必同学们初高中时的语文老师已经提着你的耳朵讲了无数遍了吧。
写PS也是一样,开头动人了,就能够吸引招生官,使他们有往下看的动力。
所以该如何写PS开头呢?
1、开门见山法
先点出重点,再依据事件发生顺序,将所见所闻写出。
e.g.
I was lucky in the fact that I picked chemical engineering and it turned out to be the right choice for me. However, my first semester at college was a rude shock - being away from home for the first time, being in a relatively male-dominated field
I started in a test lab for airplanes, where I got to break things. That is called static and fatigue testing. Then I went into design for airplanes. I worked on all areas of commercial planes including the floors and windows. I am most proud of my testing projects.
2、引用法
开头引用各种资料,加以引申,达到吸引读者,帮助突出中心的作用。
e.g.
When asked how to manage to mask remarkable statues, the French sculptor Auguste Rodin answered, “I choose a block of marble and chop off whatever I don''t need.” For me, life is just a block of marble---whether the marble can be turned into a remarkable statue depends on your natural talents, diligence and a sense of duty. During over four years’ my college life, I have been dreaming of being a perfect female researcher so that I can enhance more young girls’ confidence in scientific research and encourage them to promote the development of science as men do.
3、精辟设喻法
留学ps开头设喻,以引起读者对要说明的事物或道理的兴趣。
e.g.
“Life is just like the ocean----whatever choice you make as a steersman, you must be well aware of your favorite, namely, which is worthy of pursuing in your whole lifetime!”
Since I was admitted into ××× university three years ago, these words, just like a bright lamp, have been lightening my future and leading the way to my favorite career--- the studies of educational technology.
4、背景渐入法
引入特殊事件,阐述兴趣的起源。
e.g.
As I was finishing college, my mother had both of her hips replaced with artificial ones because all of the cartilage in her hip joints had worn away and it was very painful for her to walk. I found it fascinating that engineers, orthopedic surgeons, and biologists had all worked together to design these artificial joints that completely transform people''s lives by giving them back pain-free mobility, and I knew at that moment that this was an area about which I wanted to learn more.
个人陈述开头引入家庭背景。
e.g.
My father is a chartered accountant and my mother is a banker. During my days at Engineering College I used to go to my father’s office and help him manage his portfolio of equities and other financial instruments. This was the time I learnt the first lesson of finance from my father i.e. risk and return are proportionate. In 1998 when I was in the second year the China stock market crashed. But fortunately, my father had a well-diversified portfolio because of which our returns were protected from the downside risk. This was when I learnt the second principle of finance from my father i.e. diversification reduces risk. While I understood these two principles intuitively, it produced in me a strong urge to learn and understand the complex theory behind the working of Finance. This, I believe, was a turning point in my career. I made up my mind to pursue a career in Finance and hence decided to do a Masters program in Business Administration.
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